Mr. Swaggnificent's Arrival

*Another vehicle pulls into the garage. Seeming lost, the car turns a few corners and finally parks in a newbie spot.*

*The vehicle turns off and the doors opens. A guy with a nice flashy jacket steps out looking around while closing the door.*

*He makes his way towards the building's entrance. On the back his jacket, across his shoulders is the word "Swaggnificent."*

Nice arrival Mr. Swaggnificent, however you need to put the writing in bold when you RP, it helps it stand out more.

Also there is only a minor thing and is completely optional but it might be a good idea if extend the RP a little bit by doing something like: adding more detail of yourself or extra suspense on your arrival (is is completely optional however), just so the RP stands out compared to the rest of the roster.

except from making the writing bold, very good RP.