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Post  Scottish Thistle Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:10 pm

*A silver Ford Mustang makes its way to a parking space next to Leo Helms car then a large figure wearing a black suit comes out *

*The figure eventually reveals his name saying it is Scottish Thistle, then knocks the camera out of his face then he gets to the locker room and reveals his wrestling gear purple/green boots one half green other half purple then white tights with Scottish on one side and Thistle on the other with a thistle picture on the back*
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Post  SM HeartBreaker Wed Apr 07, 2010 4:15 pm

nice start Scottish, but you have to put the RP in green for actions and whatever colour you like for speach, well done for putting it in bold though.

however, there is a different RPing section for "locker room" so maybe you can edit it to you pushing the camera from your face when you exit the car... just an idea so we don't have the RP in two different zones of the arena.

good RP so far, don't be afraid to put more detail into your character detail as i know you can RP well, from past experience Very Happy
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Post  Scottish Thistle Wed Apr 07, 2010 4:16 pm

thanks
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